First Major Project: Pitch Stuff, 25 words etc.

New 25 Words final:
"my girlfriends an alien, and i just found out."
A graduate student, tugged into a world of aliens and intrigue by her partner, must decide to stay, or go.

info:
genre: Romcom/drama
length: 10 mins
trailer, not first 2 mins

Key location

Rochester old docks,  key location.

The vast majority of events happen on a bench, a bench on the waterfront/quay, i chose this because its the sort of place that can be between places, a place where you can stop and rest, just enjoy the day or night. in this case I'm using a waterfront location to signify, (after the revelation) just how alone the main characters are.
practically the old Docks are perfect, loads of places where i can shoot "from the river" without a boat due to the shape of the waterfront.

CHARACTERS

Mia:
(Mi, Mia, Mai)
student of languages, strange accent, interested in enjoying her life, tends to do things without premeditation, intelligent but a little derpy sometimes, enjoys walking about and watching earth stuff, loves parties and traveling, currently on gap year, Mia is generally polite but seems to use weird colloquialisms or anachronisms in conversation.
Mia has been seen wearing skinny jeans or Jeggings with T-shirts, full goth gear, harajuku style clothes, she doesn't have a specific style, she seems to be trying to find one.

Mia Madeline, (UV reflective bits not visible)

Sheryl:

(Sher, Sherry)

Artist, philosophy student, INTELLIGENT, self conscious.

likes to go out for walks along the seafront, contemplate life, chill but enjoy a night out.

Sheryl was born in Bristol, moved to Manchester and studied philosophy, psychology and literature in college before eventually settling on art for university.

she talks with a mostly clear accent with a hint of Devon and Yorkshire.

when stressed falls back on sarcasm, can be a bit rude at times of high stress.

basic idea of Sheryl's look.

OLD 25 words experimental:

"my Girlfriend's an alien, and I just found out"
two characters, they're attacked, one is revealed to be an alien, drama  from half truths and lies. cliffhanger at the end.